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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Take the pain out of love and then love won’t exist


عذبة المطر
04-12-2009, 12:45 AM
SaLam

as I promised I'll keep writing here,
eventhough I'm not getting much replies on my last posts
but anyways this is a random typing that I wrote of sorrow of love
and as they say take the pain outta love ,love won't exist ..


Enjoy it http://www.gra1m.net/vb/images/smilies/biggrin.gif




In the corner as I set alone
Hearing the ticking of the clock
?Wondering if you'll show up soon
Waiting & Waiting
& you've just no idea how much waiting is frustrating
For that damn call!
?Dear
?hello
?Where have you been gone
Just tell !
?do you miss me as much as I'm doing
?do you even still remember
?How could you just leave this way
?Can I get an explanation after
?Or at least a word you can say
But !
?will the pain you caused inside my heart ever go
??will the bleeding ever stop
?Will the tears that are shedding every time I remember the sweet times ever stop falling
ever since I knew you I thought I'll be flying up the rainbow
with you between the clouds
seeing the pure beauty of love
and holding your hand so tight
!!!!!!!But
WHEN I saw you walking away
without an *****
not even a goodbye
it didn't seem like flying above anymore
. suddenly I crashed the ground
& my whole body was bleeding
. all I can see is a darkness of an empty world
nothing seems to be known
nothing I can recognize anymore
and as for now
?How is me
"?Wait let me reform it Actually "who is me
You've gone and took away myself ,soul & my identity
I seem to be a stranger for myself
I try to look in the mirror
"Maybe I'll remember anything "about me
"But what & who I see all the time is "you
I don't know who I shall go for now
I don't know if words can help what I feel
?Will I find an open arms anymore
Or I should spell my last breaths desperately? poor core!
Tonight
the moon has disappeared
Tonight
Stars aren't really glowing
They're pale & tearing
Tonight
its a really cold night
?Would you feel the sorrow inside of me if you heard my cries
?Would you come back If I Kept doing my prays
,Dear
Tears are fading
My eyes are blind
My heart is suffering
?Is it the end
&&
after all
I've learned patience
and
how to keep silent while Dying
.. how to act ,to fake strong and happiness
while falling a part
and
Despite the memories in
my mind
and everything we have done together
I'll
carry on my life
&
remove the dust from the book of my life
and open
~ a new chapter



Waiting your Comments

شذا الورد
04-12-2009, 01:01 AM
اسمح لي ابدي اعجابي بقلمك وتميزك واسلوبك الراقي وتالقك

شذو

м я ω α н ε м
05-12-2009, 05:21 PM
يعطيك العافيه ع الطرح الجميييل

يسلموو ع يدك الحلووهـ

مش مش

malak
08-12-2009, 11:14 AM
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مغرورة بكيفي
19-12-2009, 07:54 PM
تسلمييييييييييييييين الغااااااااااااااالية عالمووضووووع و الطرح الغااااااااااااااوي

و ربي يوفقج

كلماااااااااااااااات واااااااااااااااايد روعة

و تقبلي مروري


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طموح حالمه
25-12-2009, 11:50 PM
you are so talented and creative
i,m so excited to read your new work

جً‘ـِلـٌ صٍمَّتْي ـًيًدْ }
30-12-2009, 11:54 PM
آهلين عذوبه ...
عساك على القوة .. يعطيك العافيه ..
ووودي ..

سفـ الغرام ـير
01-01-2010, 02:06 PM
..
hi sis
thank you
it's wonderful
and I Enjoy it
we are waiting for your news >>